Monday 29 September 2008
Self Evaluation
I did my presentation during fridays lesson and i think it went alright.Mr bush told me i need to change the title of my independant so its now going to be "how do representations of women in movie's such as Sex and the City differ from previous media texts,how and why have these changes occured".From the feedback i recieved i will ensure that my next presenttaion will have less text on it,just a few bullet points from which i will elaborate my point.Faizuls question about why the representation of the women have changed from the series to the film was also a good question which i will now discuss in my independant study.During the feedback mr bush told me not to quote directly from wikipedia because its basically just shit to do that so i will look for more reviews from the guardian etc to get quotes from.
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8 comments:
jasu, ur presentation was good because it had good amount of research, good visual aids like the pictures and the video clip and u spoke clearly, however ur voice was mumbled abit and towards the end u started to read of the screen abit but apart frm that it was good.
ajit
WWW:
good images and clips from text.
knew her text insude and out.
eye contact was good.
EBI:
could of engaged class a little bit more.
www.
- Good analysis of each chracter, this si agood as they all ahve differnt representations
- Good external research with other texts such as: Charlies angels and Kill Bill as both texts have differnt representations of females.
- Good eye contact throughout the presentation with the audience.
EBI.
- The presentation had alot of info which may be good, but it make the presentation too long..zzzzzZZZZZZZZ.....
Raj
WWW: images & video clip.
analysed each character well.
clear voice & eye conact with audience.
EBI: should have bullet pointed it.
engage class more.
Rajan
www:
Good use of pictures
eye contact was good
in depth
ebi:
Kept looking at bush every now and again
didn't appeal to audience. as more questions
voice wasn't clear enough
www. good presentation
good use of images and colour
explained everything well
ebi. presentation was kinda longish but was intresting
WWW: good images kept audience interested,
knows her text inside out didn't need to read from presentation, kept looking at the audience.
EBI: needed to speak slower and rushed through the presentation,
need to interact the audience a little more, ask questions etc,
needed less information was to much text.
WWW
Visual
Researched well
EBI
Audience engagement
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